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Need Some Critisim - WilliamAbuJannah - 01-05-2005
nah, it\'s already been posted, with my luck someones already working on it. :lol:
Thanks for the complment though, I really don\'t think I could write a script, all I\'m good for is short story type stuff.
Here\'s a little Fred story I did of him building his first glove and his first kill if you\'re interested.
[url=\"http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1801792/1/\"]http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1801792/1/[/url]
Need Some Critisim - Tom - 01-05-2005
HOLY SHIT! Bill,you have mad writing skillz! DAMN NICE STORY!@!!!!!
:o 
Need Some Critisim - WilliamAbuJannah - 01-05-2005
pssh, not me. Personally that story mad me sick, which is why I never wrote more to it. Wierd thing about art, sometimes you get these ideas, songs, or stories in your head and they wont leave until you make them. That\'s what that story was, it was in my head for days so I wrote it down to get it out of my head. But then I was actually kinda grossed out that I wrote about a little girl getting killed.
I am a father of 2 little girls, so it hit too close to home. It actually completely changed the way I looked at Freddy after that and I didn\'t like him so much anymore.
I still like Jason and Mike alot though, teenagers are fair game, lol. :lol:
Need Some Critisim - Tom - 01-05-2005
i see man,still,good writng.
and yeah Teenagers deserve to DIE. :lol:
Need Some Critisim - gmyers - 01-05-2005
Very nice script man. I\'m sure you know how long a good script takes to write, edit, and redo!
Need Some Critisim - WilliamAbuJannah - 01-05-2005
I never wrote a script. :unsure:
I\'ve written about 40 songs though
that took about 10 years, lol.