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Help! Finished - VF31 - 11-24-2005
it is a little "taboo" if ur selling and posting it around to any age
still tho i like it...lol
Help! Finished - The Death Curse - 11-24-2005
That looks a lot better.....But the nose\'s right (J\'s right) nostril needs to be toned down a LOT. It\'s still way too large. I\'m tellin\' ya, man...Focus on those nostrils...
That jaw line looks HELLA better, though. Bravo! I\'d make the left cheek just a bit sharper, like that black and white photo that Adam\'s been using for comparisons. It seems like there\'s a sharper point to the cheek bone on that side of the face, whereas the other cheek is more round.
Speaking of Adam, he\'s right....You should completely remove that flap of skin over J\'s right ear. It doesn\'t exist in either version on screen.
Also, Aaron is TOTALLY, COMPLETELY CORRECT about the teeth. Don\'t listen to anyone who says that the teeth are "pointy".....I can spot the flat top to the tooth in every "evidence" photo I\'ve seen for their side of the argument. The teeth are just leaning so far outward that it looks like they\'re pointy from nearly all front angles. It\'s an illusion. Plus, Aaron is more qualified than any of us on the tooth matter.....He has a (two, actually) part 4 stunt mask recast(s). That\'s like the most gigantic duh ever. =P
Aaron is also correct in that the placement of the teeth needs to be changed...Study them more closely and how they overlap (and underlap) the lips, and the angle at which they do so. Also note above-head and under-chin screen grabs of the J-man when he\'s leaning his head back (machete included) and when he\'s sliding down the machete onto the floor. These shots give a different perspective as to the placement of the teeth in respect to the jaw.
This piece is coming along REALLY well, man....It\'s already the best I\'ve ever seen, and it can be even better!...DON\'T get in a rush. Just take your time and let us know what\'s goin\' on before you decide to mold it. There are craploads of people here with valuable insight and lots of awesome pics.
Ryan
Help! Finished - GBeninati - 11-24-2005
here\'s a picture of his teeth at a different angle...
![[Image: great-white-shark-picture-022.jpg]](http://www.sharks.com/types-of-sharks/shark-pictures/great-white-shark-picture-022.jpg)
Help! Finished - hellbound81 - 11-24-2005
Yeah they are a little pointy, now I see it.....hehe
That thing looks awesome mark
Help! Finished - frosty - 11-24-2005
Well i think it looks great bud,i always thought the teeth were pointy, but now i am not sure, oh well hell of a job anyway!,
Help! Finished - Creaturedesign - 11-24-2005
Damn I did Pointy teeth to!!! Wish I knew about that. Oh Well.
![[Image: JasonBust7.jpg]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/JonFuller/JasonBust7.jpg)
Help! Finished - Bloodyaxe - 11-24-2005
I think 187 is a cool ass name..
Help! Finished - Cryptoys.com - 11-24-2005
Mark, I think it\'s possibly the best part 4 I\'ve ever seen. I wouldn\'t touch it.
I would call it "Crispin Killer". Jason
Help! Finished - The Death Curse - 11-24-2005
I just noticed something else that you could fix... J\'s right eyebrow bows too much. It should be a straighter downward slope and not so much of an arch.
Ryan
Help! Finished - travsall - 11-24-2005
I think other then Ryan\'s picky ass :wink: you\'ve got us pretty well impressed. I love the character in that face, you got my quiet desperation/massive dump can\'t wait to see it painted up, most likely will be adding this guy to my slightly large order too