+- NightOwl Forums (https://forums.nightowlpro.com)
+-- Forum: The Crypt (https://forums.nightowlpro.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=12)
+--- Forum: Off Topic (https://forums.nightowlpro.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=9)
+--- Thread: Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update (/showthread.php?tid=8939)
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - Hauntmaster9 - 11-27-2005
This one is hard to critique, for one thing the bridge of the nose looks too thick and makes the eyes look too close together. The mouth also look really off.
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - HorrorFX - 11-28-2005
Yes Mark it is water based. I will try and fix the nose, the brows and the lips this afternoon and see what the reslut is. More pics to follow.
-Chris
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - null1 - 11-28-2005
Chris, got your PM. These are the only two that I have. Sorry for the watermark I dont want that peckerhead on Ebay gettin\' his mits on unmarked photos of this one. Hope this pic works, it\'s not showing up for me :unsure:
![[Image: 375dcbdc.jpg]](http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y46/labproject/375dcbdc.jpg)
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - FVJ Leatherface - 11-28-2005
Its not showing up for me either Mark
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - tcm - 11-28-2005
it\'s looking pretty good
but there\'s a few changes that i would make.
.the nose looks a little too broad, i suggest just getting a tool, and scraping off excess clay.
.the eyes are too close to the nose, space them out a little more.
.the neck looks a little thin, but i think thickening and defining the jaw area a bit more will get rid of that look
.speaking of which, i think the jaw needs to be elongated a bit more
.it looks a bit too round, making it a bit more \'boxy\' will get rid of that look
.the shoulders could possibly be raised a little more
.the brow looks a little too flat, i suggest rounding it off
.the burns/scars look a tad bit too deep, smoothen them out a bit, and that will make them look less harsh (more realistic)
sorry if the critique seemed harch, but i see potential in this piece, and i think once the things listed are changed, it will look very good.
all in all, i think you\'ve done a good job with the sculpture, just some little things need refining.
keep us updated!
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - HorrorFX - 11-28-2005
Ill jump on those changes now, thank you my friend. Mark the pics arnt showing for me either.
-Chris
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - HorrorFX - 11-28-2005
Ok guys ive been toying with it. I still am yet to give him the "old man jaw". Plus still have to add in final detail ( the detail you see was quickly done).
cheers guys
-Chris
![[Image: DSC00029.jpg]](http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a299/killerrighthand/DSC00029.jpg)
![[Image: DSC00030.jpg]](http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a299/killerrighthand/DSC00030.jpg)
![[Image: DSC00032.jpg]](http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a299/killerrighthand/DSC00032.jpg)
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - Tyson - 11-28-2005
Wow man. This sculpture is coming along nicely. Loving the burns on the top of the head.
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - The13thDreamShape - 11-28-2005
his head is liek a grape fruit head. Ya gotta change it a bit. and the neck is too skinny. and the chin eyes, etc.
Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update - HorrorFX - 11-28-2005
could someone make up a comparison pic or something so i get a clear idea of how the head shape should be?
cheers
-Chris