Need Some Critisim

[🪦 WilliamAbuJannah ●]

nah, it\'s already been posted, with my luck someones already working on it. :lol:


Thanks for the complment though, I really don\'t think I could write a script, all I\'m good for is short story type stuff.

Here\'s a little Fred story I did of him building his first glove and his first kill if you\'re interested.

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[Tom]

HOLY SHIT! Bill,you have mad writing skillz! DAMN NICE STORY!@!!!!! :o

[🪦 WilliamAbuJannah ●]

pssh, not me. Personally that story mad me sick, which is why I never wrote more to it. Wierd thing about art, sometimes you get these ideas, songs, or stories in your head and they wont leave until you make them. That\'s what that story was, it was in my head for days so I wrote it down to get it out of my head. But then I was actually kinda grossed out that I wrote about a little girl getting killed.

I am a father of 2 little girls, so it hit too close to home. It actually completely changed the way I looked at Freddy after that and I didn\'t like him so much anymore.

I still like Jason and Mike alot though, teenagers are fair game, lol. :lol:

[Tom]

i see man,still,good writng.


and yeah Teenagers deserve to DIE. :lol:

[🪦 gmyers ●]

Very nice script man. I\'m sure you know how long a good script takes to write, edit, and redo!

[🪦 WilliamAbuJannah ●]

I never wrote a script. :unsure:

I\'ve written about 40 songs though

that took about 10 years, lol.