Need Opinions On Script...

[🪦 josephchoi ●]

Just a suspense/horror i guess... only about 5 min long... <a href=\"http://pc.celtx.com/project/Lf5OLhLszP0u\" target=\"_blank\">http://pc.celtx.com/project/Lf5OLhLszP0u</a>Whether you hate it or love it or whatever, lay it out! thanks <img src=\"style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif\" style=\"vertical-align:middle\" emoid=\"\" border=\"0\" alt=\"biggrin.gif\" />

[🪦 Homicidal#9 ●]

i like it joseph...but i guess my question is...what's the point of the film? There is no story...just an event that happens.take care,Tommy

[🪦 josephchoi ●]

I have a very specific time limit (no less than 4, no more than 5 min) so I thought of doing what is essentially a scene pretty much since I can't fit in an actual story with beginning, middle, and end, at least the way I'd like.

[🪦 Homicidal#9 ●]

well....like i said...i like it.take care,Tommy

[🪦 josephchoi ●]

thanks tommy!! always appreciated <img src=\"style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif\" style=\"vertical-align:middle\" emoid=\"\" border=\"0\" alt=\"smile.gif\" />