Whatever You Do, Dont Fall Asleep!update

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it\'s looking pretty good
but there\'s a few changes that i would make.

.the nose looks a little too broad, i suggest just getting a tool, and scraping off excess clay.
.the eyes are too close to the nose, space them out a little more.
.the neck looks a little thin, but i think thickening and defining the jaw area a bit more will get rid of that look
.speaking of which, i think the jaw needs to be elongated a bit more
.it looks a bit too round, making it a bit more \'boxy\' will get rid of that look
.the shoulders could possibly be raised a little more
.the brow looks a little too flat, i suggest rounding it off
.the burns/scars look a tad bit too deep, smoothen them out a bit, and that will make them look less harsh (more realistic)


sorry if the critique seemed harch, but i see potential in this piece, and i think once the things listed are changed, it will look very good.
all in all, i think you\'ve done a good job with the sculpture, just some little things need refining.
keep us updated!