02-27-2006, 07:19 AM
Looks pretty cool, but things are too \'direct\' and harsh on the contrast. Don\'t put so much emphasis on the line itself. In a painting like that, there shouldn\'t really be any lines at all. Everything just fades together with the lighting. I noticed in your sketches that you like to outline the shaded areas, instead of shading and blending them in. Just work on blending and shading. Unless you were going for a \'style\', in which case: ignore everything I just said hehe.