02-05-2008, 02:02 PM
Yep work on the forms first and the then shapes before thinking about details.something that looks wrong is the mouth area.I can see that you are sculpting on a head armature and to have a sculpture with an open mouth on an armature without an open mouth is very dificult to acheive as the whole face shape changes, ie jaw goes down , nose goes up and forehead comes down ,hard to get it looking right when you have a bust underneath as it some what limits the movement you can acheieve.The teeth should also be further back in the face than what they are.What I sometimes do is get some one to pull the same pose that you are sculpting and take photos of them from all angles so you get a better idea of the shape and depth of the face.Like hellbilly said, use some anatomy pics for reference of the muscle structure in the face and it will help your sculpts in future.and yea the fx lab is the best place to show your work and get some good advice.hope that helps