11-30-2008, 05:58 AM
I would make the white part of the eye an off white undead look, but not too yellow. Then the cornea/pupil area a darker glazed look, like you see in most older dogs.Should work out pretty well, if not just make it a darker brown/black eye. I know you want something original, but as IbDaToNeGuY said, having the eye stick out too much with brighter colors may throw off the whole look off, in my opinion of course.I know some people have been giving you a hard time about this sculpt and you were only asking for help on the eye, and now that the sculpt is done it's a little late.. however, I know nothing about doing sculpts or anything, but here are my suggestions / comments on the overall thing.Mouth looks a little too triangular, teeth too flat but mostly wide gives it a cartoon/comic look.Eye a little big, eyebrows have too much arch, both giving the same cartoon/comic drawn look.Overall the mask is great, I am certain mine would not look near as good if I tried. Attention to overall detail for a first is quite good.Again, I know nothing about sculpting, this is just my suggestions and my opinions. Also I would suggest maybe posting pictures of the sculpt next time for criticism before finishing it up.