12-29-2008, 07:05 AM
Well i listened to it and liked it for the most part, i couldnt help but feeling like it was going to pick up though, it felt like it was leading into a point where you would begin screaming out some lyrics, wich i think would have really set this song off, but you kept the tone at a steady pace, it was a little mellow for the lyrics in my opinion, but i did like it and think you definately have a good voice and some skills on the 6, i would love to hear this song with a lil more rage kind of in the middle of the song then going back to mellow, but thats just my opinion, and if you do change it up a lil and make it more intense let me know so i can hear it, great voice, great talent, thanx for sharing!!!