Need Some Opinions

[🪦 capnvlad ●]

I have only filmed skate videos before of me and my friends, so we are now trying to put together a fan film of friday the 13th, and this was our first night of filming, i had no idea it would take 3 hours to film a 1 minute 15 second scene, but this turned out really well, we are gonna go back and touch up a couple tid bitsthings i need to improve by me judging it myself-lighting-victim jumping when i pin him on the wall-me touching the wall when i step over his bodybut we really damaged the wall, and realized there was electric wire behind that wall. what we plan to add..-outside shot of me looking through the window- and outside shot looking in through a window of me carrying the body around the corner- the actor actually opening the door and entering the buildingwe have the story line all together, we got a great backstory on why they are at this cabin and everythingthis is just a sneak preview.. test film and i would love to get everyone's opinions.. you guys nit pick at everything, so i want to get your opinions so i can improve this filmYou may have to adjust the brightness, depending on how well lit your monitor is, also.. notice how the "Sheriff Snaps" music goes so good with the first half of the scene.. its almost like the music was made for this scene<a href=\"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWH7CZ_L7mY\" target=\"_blank\">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWH7CZ_L7mY</a>