11-24-2004, 04:52 AM
Ok well,..first off nice style!!and great color.
next try to rough everything out first in either thumbnails or in full page just so you can pick from various compositions such as where the bodies will be etc, etc
then start fleshing the bodies out lightly trying to create action!!! ACTION being a key word here..for instance, we would like to see leather face more imposing with that chainsaw, more menacing to the veiwer,he is ok but push his body more to create( like before) more action!!! then jason , he is well just kinda there..it would be cool if you had him in a position like he has just thrown a body down or just reached the top og his pile!! ya\' know??push his shoulders forward ,space his lege further apart, give him power like only jason has...lastly michael,great job on mikey!!...however you can give him more purpous even if he just stands around most of the time..next time think about giving him more of a 3/4 turn look and give his legs more of a stance again create power within a 2d drawing by always checking stances and positions.The best tool you have is yourself and the best part is is that YOU are around all the time you need to be when you draw so close the door to your room and practice what your drawing will be doing to get the feel of how the body will be in action!!!!!!.
greta drawing man.
jason.
next try to rough everything out first in either thumbnails or in full page just so you can pick from various compositions such as where the bodies will be etc, etc
then start fleshing the bodies out lightly trying to create action!!! ACTION being a key word here..for instance, we would like to see leather face more imposing with that chainsaw, more menacing to the veiwer,he is ok but push his body more to create( like before) more action!!! then jason , he is well just kinda there..it would be cool if you had him in a position like he has just thrown a body down or just reached the top og his pile!! ya\' know??push his shoulders forward ,space his lege further apart, give him power like only jason has...lastly michael,great job on mikey!!...however you can give him more purpous even if he just stands around most of the time..next time think about giving him more of a 3/4 turn look and give his legs more of a stance again create power within a 2d drawing by always checking stances and positions.The best tool you have is yourself and the best part is is that YOU are around all the time you need to be when you draw so close the door to your room and practice what your drawing will be doing to get the feel of how the body will be in action!!!!!!.
greta drawing man.jason.